Responded to another writing challenge yesterday. A neighbor and great friend, Kevin Pace, who is a gifted musician and composer, asked me at church if I had ever written a hymn text. I had never attempted to do so in the past, so later that afternoon I got to work and the following is what I came up with. I sent a copy to Kevin and he reports that he immediately had a tune to go with it (he's pretty amazing that way).
Anyway, here is the text. I'll post the music when Kevin finishes putting it together.
Be Ye Therefore Perfect
VERSE 1
Be ye therefore perfect,
My Savior said to me,
And yet I find that on my own
I live imperfectly.
Each time that I falter,
I seek to hide my shame.
But only through confession can
I seek the Savior’s name.
CHORUS
Repentance is a gift of God
From His Beloved Son.
I humbly seek to change my heart
And with them both be one.
VERSE 2 (add upbeat to both stanzas)
Temptations all around me,
My weaknesses are clear,
But through atoning sacrifice
Christ banishes my fear.
Perfection still eludes me,
Though striving year by year.
Forsaking sin I turn to God
And find Him ever near.
REPEAT CHORUS
Repentance is a gift of God
From His Beloved Son.
I humbly seek to change my heart
And with them both be one.
VERSE 3
Show me clearly Father
The path to Thee on high.
And help me know Christ is the One
On whom I can rely.
Precept upon precept,
The path of Christ is sure
So step by step I’ll follow Him
And every test endure.
REPEAT CHORUS
Repentance is a gift of God
From His Beloved Son.
I humbly seek to change my heart
And with them both be One.
That is amazing! I can't wait to hear it to music and see it appear in a future edition of the Ensign.
ReplyDeleteYou are an incredible inspiration my brother. I hope the Music does it justice.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for sharing this. I have lost many hours of sleep in the middle of the night because a song has come to me. I am glad to know this is a genetic trait and that you have it in spades.
ReplyDeleteAmazing! Should be in the next edition of the hymn book.
ReplyDeleteI have the music from Kevin now in both PDF and MP3 formats, but i do not know how to post a file for sharing on the blog (not sure it can even be done.
ReplyDeleteSo anyone who wants a copy (either or both files), just send me an email (mark@utahmed.org) and request it.
Amy also is working on a version of the music too. I'm quite flattered.
Amazing! This belongs published somehow to be shared with all people!
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